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高三英语短文改错

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高三短文改错
 (一)
  When I first learned to write in English, I ran into 1. _______
  many difficulties. The main problem was in that I 2. _______
  always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything 3. _______
  into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. 4. _______
  I followed her advice and should put down 100 words 5. _______
  or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on 6. _______
  paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. 7. _______
  One day I wrote a little story and showed to my 8. _______
  teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. 9. _______
  They all said the story was a good one. Their word were 10. ______
  a great encouragement to me.
  (二)
  Dear Ralph,
  I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 1. _______
  describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 2. _______
  it seems always difficult for me to do things well as 3. _______
  them. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as 4. _______
  a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 5. _______
  Besides, I have few friends. I don’t know that they 6. _______
  don’t like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 7. _______
  very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 8. _______
  once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t 9. _______
  seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? 10. _______
  Yours,
  Xiao Wei

  1. 此行无错。
  2. 删去 in。根据句意及句子结构,此处为表语从句。
  3. anything 改为 everything。此处为肯定句,anything 意为“任何一件事”,侧重个体;而 everything 意为“一切事情”,侧重整体。
  4. my 改为 a。keep a diary 为固定短语,意为“记日记”。
  5. 删去 should。and 连接两个并列的平行结构,前后时态均为一般过去时态。
  6. talk 改为 talking。enjoy doing 为固定用法。故此处必须用动名词作宾语。
  7. me 改为 myself。express oneself 为固定短语。
  8. showed 后加 it。show 为及物动词,后面应接宾语。
  9. reads 改为 read。and 连接两个并列的平行结构,前后时态均为一般过去时态。
  10. word 改为 words。根据句意,此处应为“他们的话语,”用 words。

  (二)
  1. of改为from。of表示所属意义,此处应为“来自一个小城镇”。
  2. quietly改为quiet。describe后接名词或代词+ as +名词或形容词,其中as +名词或形容词作宾语补足语,表示“把…描写成什么/什么样子”。
  3. well前加as。as well as“跟…(做得)一样好”。
  4. to改为at。laugh to… 意为“对…大笑”。laugh at…意为“嘲笑”,有明显的、有意的敌意的含义,根据后文and see me as a fool,故应用laugh at才对。
  5. 此行无错误。
  6. that改为why。that引导宾语从句,本身无意义,只起连接作用。
  7. talked改为talk。整篇文章叙述的都是现在的情况。改为现在时,使其与上下文一致。
  8. stranger改为strangers。与句子主语we一致。
  9. since改为but。根据上下文,前后句之间为转折关系。
  10. 删除about。tell的结构为:tell sb. sth. “告诉某人某事”,表示直接意义;tell sb. about sth. “告诉某人有关某事的某些内容”,表示间接意义。

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