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2013山东高考作文题解析

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2013山东高考作文题解析
写作(满分30分)
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件:
1.       未及时回复的原因;
2.       你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
注意:
1. 次数:120~150;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
 
【试题点评】
     今年的书面表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯,时隔一年之后重新回到“书信题”的大框架中,考了一篇“以道歉信为外衣,以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文,相当于10年山东卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷(假期安排)和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的,因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外,本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多,因此,只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考作文的提分方法,掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词,并加以针对性训练,这道题目应该不难写。
 
【经典套路】
    第一段:问候+写信背景+写信目的
    第二段:“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)
    第三段:“假期安排”部分
    第四段:补充说明+客套话
 
2013山东高考英语作文范文
      Dear Tom,
      How are you doing? (问候)  You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.(写信背景) I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(写信目的)
      How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段为道歉信常见套路)
      By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主题句) First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1) Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3)
     These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套话结尾)

2013山东高考英语作文题目解析及高分范文

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